BEHIND THE POEM: JUDGEMENT




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A couple of weeks into writing the poem, I got obsessed with the idea of writing this poem in first person point of view. What was contradicting the whole setup, however, was the fact that the issue of being judged is so universal that limiting the omniscient would just have not done justice to the poem. That’s when I decided to go for a path that dealt with both simultaneously. When you read the poem you’d realize that the point of view of the poem is both first person and third person. This makes the poem universal while at the same time also helps the readers resonate on a personal level.

Being dramatic, which you are.

For those of us who have been subjected to judgement from irrelevant people (viz. all of us), would not be surprised by how ridiculous yet dumbfounding the allegations on Mr. I were. The blames were direct and denied the accused of any chance of clarifying or justifying himself.

“There are anonymous sources,
Whose reporting we have considered.”

Who are these sources? Are they the vamps of our lives? Are they the envious competitors? Are they humans at all? Most of the times, these sources are the brains of the judgemental people themselves. Renowned American fiction writer, Gayle Forman has pertinently said, “People believe what they want to believe”. There is nothing you can do or say that would change their minds. This theory extends to something that I am covering in one of my upcoming poems. You may try all you want, all you can. You may go beyond your capacity, but people will remain blind to the amount of efforts you put for the sake of their happiness because they choose to do so.  Yes, the judge isn’t some higher authority, it is the people themselves.

Based on what appearances convey.

How much do things sell on the basis of their external appearances. There’s a reason why presentation is often an evaluative component in Language exams. More than the content, the handwriting often factors in for a higher score. People don’t want to put in effort to find out the exact truth. They take things the way they come. Glossy headlines are created keeping this human psychology in mind.

All these fingers pointing at you
Will soon make you question yourself.

I was extremely scared of how people would react to this poem because it was inspired by some of the instances that occurred in the past year and involved some of my good friends. I kept being scared until came the day when I named my poem and decided the direction in which it was going to go. It was going to thrash the judgements of the judgemental and that’s when I knew I needed to stop worrying/caring so much about the output and just write it down. That’s exactly what I want to convey to my readers. It’s important that you speak up. As long as your words aren’t maligned with bad intention, you're good to go. You can’t keep typing and deleting it all out. You can’t keep sulking in a dark corner because your talent is unconventional. You can’t stop standing up for what is right because some people find it comfortable to slacken off, be indifferent and call you dramatic to validate their lack of confidence. You can’t keep staring at the pointy end of others’ fingers and feeling incredulous about yourself.

Or should I get other people tried?

If the readers would have noticed, a judgement was released but punishment was never announced. What I had in my mind was to draw analogy between a courtoom and the society using this tool. The reality is that the judgement of whether someone is guilty or not is decided by the detractors, but the punishment is decided by the victim himself. The duration for which the detractor’s destructive comments stay in the person’s head is the duration the person serves.


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